Pain

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 24, 2005


I am wide awake
now feeling the pain
in the dark
without any thoughts
i feel numb
without my heart
but once i was happy
like a new born baby
i had everything
including you
than you went far
took my heart
from my soul
i was left alone
with nothing to do
except staying awake
and feel the soul taking pain

please read a comment. i wrote this poem from my heart~!!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    hope that pain will heal soon

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Aww the pain from a broken heart .... been there once and still feel the pain and times.

    For some reason there is no pain except death that will come close to the pain from your heart being broke.

    Great job putting in all in words.

    Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    It really does sound like u wrote the poem from your heart, I have to say you did a really good job. Nice work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Excellent job, your style is similar to mine when I write freestyle-5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Thanx for the comment
    It really put a smile upon my face =)
    Great poem you've got here.
    5 stars for a star.. *smile*

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