fcuk that was good!!! i like the way u put eryting, it sounds awsum aye!! well done aye!!!

wow this was so good im giving u a 5!
keep it up
rock on!

Beautiful... very touching work!!!!

Take care!!

CyN

totally love it

wow that was so good i love how you used a butterfly it's an amazing metephor!
xxxChristinaxxx

wow, that was amazng, i loved it , keep it up xxxx

Hey,
I Really liked this poem, you are a really good poet, and i can relate to this poem, keep up the good work 5/5
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