wow that was a really good poem....

Thats really lovely and it reads really well. Well done!
Jemma

your an Excellent poet, i am reading your poems and i love all of them, good job on them all :). plzz read my poems and tell me what you thank , keep on writeing ;)

great potential babe, keep writing! 4/5
Love Heather.

excellent! im so glad theres someone that can show you the light and the truth. beautiful poem! ur extremely talented. keep up the great work!
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That was very well done Loved it. I read some of ur other ones very good as well. I can't always comment on these it keeps making me login again. Great Job on all of them!