Really good job! 5/5
-J-

Awww Wow.. Beautiful poem! I loved this! Keep it up! *5/5* God Bless:)

-x-Sedusha-x-
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thanx. i appreciate your comments. keep em comin!!
*Zac*

That's awesome!!! I love that one...its a HAPPIER one!! whoop!!
Katie

hehe. yeah, i dont get much happy...
*Zac*

^^Of course you do.

You've changed a lot, and I can see that you're a happier person. But all sympathy, all REAL feelings for other people's pain is too much of a memory now. Its too hard to sympathize with others for you, I think. At least, for the people I know whom you've loved at one point, you've let them all down by changing.

Yet here I am. Still here. :-)

beautiful. a true poet!