~ nice write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

An amzing write. Loved it

Well done
Jemma

great work hunzz :D
peace

Good poem, you use a lot of words that confuse me somtimes haha. Well i liked it all in all, *in this poem in knew them all* but you use a lot of advanced words that most wouldn't understand.

I really like your poems.

Five/Five

thats ok,i liked that.maybe whitney got a wee bit jealous lol,mind you she got a new friend in town now so hez dont take it personal,take it with a pinch of salt

hey, thanks for your nice comment... i like this, it flows nicely and the words are haunting. peace.

I knew just from the title that this was gonna be amazing, but wow! I really liked the text...very bold writing! Keep it up~Holly

I love the way you write so poetically instead of so bluntly and unartistic like everyone else, keep writing your awsome

i love it! very creative and unique piece of writing...

Wow...I've only read 2 of your poems but I am soooo adding you to my friends list. They're awesome.

i like it, you ended it very well creative idea and good use of words! your such a sweetheart! PLP

~lil slam~

i see where you're gong with this but some of the wording doesn't quite make sense, though i do love the flow of it, and the meaning in it. x

okay looking deeper into the first verse, which was what confused me, i now understand, but once sentence i think you worded wrong was :
filled with torns from the seams.
was it meant to be 'filled with tears from the seems?'
i'll re-vote if it'll let me a five now i understand it, lol i guess that's a huge complement of how clever a writer you are that it took me so long to understand what i now see is a beautiful first verse, take care x x x x

it won't let me vote it a five since i already voted, but please know i think it's a five and beyond x x x x