wonderful poem

o shutup.I meant i dont try to be someone im not. And i said i am too nice sometimes wich u point out to me ALOT! but thats ok i love you anyway

"karli is one of the friends that i was talking about in the poem"

Thanks for ur comments ur poems are so good I wish I could write the way so many people on here do! U do great work

thank u for da comments i like dz poem iz kewl dat ur showin da real u

oo i love this poem!! this is really good!! great job..:)

i love this poem, its so good and i love the theme of it about knowing who u r. keep it up xxxx

I really like this, really shows who you are, and it is writting pretty nicely. keep up the good work
Paula

P.s it would be great if you could comment or vote on any of my feutured poems.

it's really good that you know who you are and are cool with that....I bet there are so many people out there that wish they could be like you (me included), good job

this was another great poem, you're a good writer....I like how you made this poem your own, you can really see you put yourself into it....take care girl...
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

heyy i love the ending
very nive work
keep it up

Beautiful poem :)

Lol...very cute poem and omg i love mac and cheese too...lol i wrote a poem about it:) anyway great poem...it is wonderful that you know who you are!!! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I agree with Gandalf about how your poem flows, it's kind of choppy, but the message is great. I love that you have pride in who you are, even within all your imperfections. I also really liked the last couple lines, the ending of a poem determines how the poem is received. Your ending was beautiful. Keep up the good work!! :)