Inner darkness~!!!~

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 28, 2005


I am lying awake
In the dark
Feeling alone
With no one to talk
Then my inner darkness begins to grow
Slowly at first
Then as fast as a roller coaster
I am scared
I don’t know what to do
One second I want to be bad
The other i want to be good
I start prying
From the only god I know
I hope he listens because he is my only hope.
I want to be good
Like I was before
I don’t know what went wrong
Or where did she go ~!!~
I want to be happy
Like I was before
It seems impossible
When my inner darkness grows
I cried for help
Screamed out loud
Hope some one listens
And helps me out
God if you heard me
Please forgive me
I want to die
So get rid of me

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  • 20 years ago

    by Misstress

    Well,
    Another good one.
    What else can i say.
    ;)

  • 20 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    Excellent job, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

  • 20 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, I loved that, well done
    5! xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Amilo

    Is snow fast?

    again, inconsistent rhyming.. a style too much of teen angst for me. Again, more vividness and try using imagery every now and then.

  • 20 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice write nida. u write a lot of sad stuff. sadness ---> not good
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

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