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  • 15 years ago

    by katie!

    really good well done..

  • 15 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    erm....i didn't get it.

  • 15 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    neither do i:( and it all sounds so beautiful...could u add an explanationation at the end or sumthin??

  • 15 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I will give u the meaning that I get from this poem. I think ur trying to say someone has the hots for u and u don't want to get married because it would mean forgood. Something along those lines. The words u picked I think are hard for people to understand. I know the meanings of the words but it is what makes the poem so unique I really like it alot. Maybe I didn't understand it I don't know. Would love for u to get back to me on this. It was beautiful.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I have read this a few times now and I am wondering if it's a guy that u think wants nothing more than to get in ur pants. I can't wait to find out the meaning behind this. U have me intrigued now!

  • 15 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    That poem, was awesome... very well written. Although, I have to question your age, not that i expect an answer. You seem wiser than most on this site. Again this poem was amazing, take care...

  • 15 years ago

    by Leah20

    Wow. You have an amazing vocabulary. You are a wonderful poet. Just... wow. I have no other words to explain. I really enjoyed this work. I think that I shall add you to my favorites. Keep up the awesome work!

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert

    Love the way you use your description in your words but the main point seems still hidden sorry...

  • 14 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Excellent, I like your choice and use of words.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrea

    I really liked this one. again i didnt really get it

  • 14 years ago

    by aaron c s

    That was a really great poem! i loved how each stanza meant something else but still the same and how each one was a different story.

  • 14 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    I love the kind of language you use........You're a very good writer......sorry it took a while to look at them........
    xoxo
    Cassie