Wow, the last two lines just fit perfectly, great job Katie my friend, you know you have talent :P Keep it up xxx

HAHAHA I'm a Vampire of Seduction ;)

thats so sad - if this is kinda trueish good luck and i hope it all gets better - otherwise great poem

Jemma

great poem!!

~ very well written, and sad
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit