Comments : As we lay...

  • 19 years ago

    by Josh Sowiecki

    wow this is a really good poem, very well writtin. It has so much meaning and it flows together just right. I loved it!! Plz read "shes mine" and give me some advice! thank you!!

  • 19 years ago

    by RebeccaPower

    wow ... love it ... so amazing and ... descriptive.
    becca ox

  • 19 years ago

    by Gregwa

    man this is good

  • 19 years ago

    by butterfly ♥ kisses

    I love your poem. It's flows perfectly and your feelings are well expressed. I gave you a 5! Check out some of my poems plz if you get the chance thanks :)

    ~Kayla

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    wow its great i loved it ...... :D
    peaceee

  • 19 years ago

    by PoetsSecrets

    Im glad you all like this poem and hopefully you'll check out some of the others.
    PoetsSecrets

  • 17 years ago

    by poetmusicsoul

    I thought that poem was something that i never readed before that was very excellent. and by the way my member name is poetmusicsoul check my poems out.