thanks for the comment Donica, i wish you had some poems i can comment on :(

that was amazing! so sad...i almost felt like i was there you know what i mean? well nice work keep it up!
xxxChristinaxxx

I was touched! If you didn't write it I surely would have tried! I doubt I could have done it as good as you did though! It was amazing, and it truly made my day! Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance

You write so well. A very touching poem keep writing I love reading ur poems they are all really good!

Excellent poem....so well done....I have seen that scene before, although I was the one finding a friend....you captured it well.....great job....

Kalika

Oh my God, did that actually happened? I hope you are better now.. if it is of any help, you write beautifully, congratulations, and keep on writing

Rocky start... but you pulled it off well by grasping the readers and pulling on their emotions. An unfortunate twist of events, you carried on not only from her death, but how others reacted. Well done, though you didn't need to force rhyming to make this powerful. it already was.
Very sad... yet beautiful and ironic.

wow wow.. 5 stars! Take Care

i just wanted to say thanks for the comments, they mean so much...you all have great work!! keep it up!! take care...:)