~ nice write, very lovely
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

I thought this poem was really good keep up the good work.

Great job Brittney! I really enjoyed this poem. It was so sweet. Keep up the good work and thanks for the comments on my poem:) You rock!

This was such a good poem. It says a lot. Very good!! Thanx for the comment too! Keep writing!! Lotsa luv Gem xx

nice work!! but i gave my bf the key 2 my heart when all he did was abuse his welcome, n now i want it back because when the key is n his hands it causes 2 much pain, ya feel me.

I think this one is just wonderful! i absolutely loved it! 5!!