this poem wus really good... i love your choice of words, it flows very well.
keep up the writing
xoxo
[[Samz*~]]

Liked it a lot! Keep on writing!

Good poem. Your poem describes how I feel as well so I liked it more. It didn't always flow nicely but you described things well. 5/5

luv it. i really do like it. i didnot vote on it because my comp wont some how work on the vote page.

sorry messed up computer but i would give it a <5>

really good poem!

This is a really good peom! I really like it!!

Very emotional, I'm speechless, this poem was awesome. Keep writing. Take care!

A really sad poem, but again, very well written. There was so much emotion behind it, it was a beautiful poem. Keep it up.

thats amazing! it's so...wow.. lol keep it up!

-jenn

wow, I like this one a lot =)
I really ike the part:
"Her tears flow like a river
out of her deep brown eyes,
and down her face,
the day he said goodbye."

wow,wow. 5/5 for you!
Bye

amazing poem >5/5<!
xxxChristinaxxx

a very missed love ... always one of the most sadest poems to be created ... well done but i think the first and second stanza should be changed to

Her tears flowed like a river
out of her deep brown eyes,
They ran down her face,
the day he said goodbye.

The soft touch of a warm embrace
was what she felt that day.
When he gave her that last hug,
She knew her love couldn't stay

I just thought you shouldn't say goodbye twice there but if u don't want to change it is fine i still enjoed it a lot ... well done and keep up the good work 5/5

This is another really good poem! 5/5 you are an awesome writer. i have added you to my favs, if you wish to do the same that is cool. This is a brilliant poem. Well Done! Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

excellent poem! i loved it! great job, i can totally relate to it! keep it up!!

if you have time, check out my latest poems, i wrote 2 today.. tell me how you like them, it would mean alot!

..xO Jessie

WOw, very good poem, really emotional, keep it up xx

wow, what can i say? that was so good, i especially liked the last lines. good job. btw, thanx for commenting on my poem...:)
SatuzKa

I liked this poem. Good job!

another great poem!! powerful! loved the words u used too!! keep it up i love your work!

vedali

Awesome poem hun. Keep it up!!

Love,
Tiff