Awsome.. You did a great job on this keep it up!!

thanks for letting me know. i dinot know thou means you. i hope if any one else has any suggestions they let me know because i really want to get better at this. :)

Some people are born with the gift to write and u sure are one of them.

Great poem. I know how you feel. This whole poem is a great metaphor. Keep it up!
Thanks for the comment on my poem, it meant a lot.

Love,
Tiff

I like the metaphor you used. Good poem. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment on mine :)

great poem!!!

I cant relate...I hope things looked up for you

Great poem.. Like it a lot =)
5 stars for you..
please check out my poems.
HUgs

sure go ahead. put it in your profile..

keep up the good work

~~~~Xiaoyu~~~~

This is almost flawless i love it... i read it over and over... i couldnt fine one mistake... much love Sherrie

ALready comment but what the hell great job! I don't mind reading them again!

I really liked your imagery in this poem, keep it up!

interesting poem ... it seems to be more in the catigory of desired love but maybe thats just me ... other than that beautiful poem ... well done 5/5

that was a cute poem!! lovely work!! keep it up!! thanks for the comment!! :) take care.

~ nice and sad, nida. good poem
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

I liked the concept of this poem. The only critism I have is that you should either have a blank verse poem ( one that never rhymes) or a rhyming poem. Because it seemed to me that you tried to have a bit of a rhyme in the middle and it didn't fit. Otherwise, good job!

This is a good poem and has been written really well. Love Emma xxx

It is also 5/5. Love Emma xxx

I think it's a very good poem, and you wrote it well. It confused me at the second part though, because it seemed to be different than the first part. Other than that, I thought it was great, and it even reminded me of my poem The Flower a little bit. Thx for the comments on mine 2!:)