~ nice one, ann. good at rhyme, and beautiful lines, like always. but 'world of sweet defeat'???
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

awwww, very beautiful and lovely written poem!

beautiful Ann, i have the same feelings for someone, i would love to hand them this poem :( lol, i love ya hugs

Love Heather.

wonderful tender love story...Very well written it flowed beautifully from start to end.

I loved your diction.

Kisses
Hayley

beautifull poem :D
keep it up
peace

Hi Ann,
I loved this one so much,it tells a lot about this life..you are great..I loved it
Jeff

I've got one word for this poem Beautiful!!! I loved it! If ya wanna check out my poem ' I can't help wishing' and tell me whatcha think.
Keep up the good work! And I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
God Bless!

Rebecca.