Indeed who could ask for more? Great write just one little thing I thought I'd share I thought that the line:

"that keep moving."

seemed just a little cut-off to me. Dunno if it was just me but I thought I'd share anyways for whatever help it might be. I would suggest maybe a couple more words like maybe make it that keep on moving but yeah.

Please don't take that personally. I loved the poem anyways just the way it is :)

oo of course..i would never take anyones opinionpersonally..i actually thought the same thing but i hadnt the idea what word to put..but with the help of my sister, i found just the word..but thatnks for your suggestion..:)

its pretty hun, i'm not much for nature poems but cute! -5

with love,
Heather.

Exellent it makes me think of my vacation thats coming up in June! Love the ocean!

very good poem. i luv the beach and it just makes ma want to go back there more. keep it up.