Better

by Sinister Soire   Mar 3, 2005


*complete crap, sorry*

Life is at its bottom
There is no lower point
I have not forgotten
The joy I once lived

There appears to be nothing
Good like I live today
To say I’m good would be bluffing
But it could be worse

There is truly one advantage
To everything that is bad
Is that it can only manage
To get better from there

And good has an opportunity
To become better
To form a sense of unity
For everything

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  • 19 years ago

    by Angeline

    I think its amazing how easy (it seems like that) you write a poem. Since last time I read anyone (way too much homeworks) you have writtend, fantasticly, 41 moore poems....what else is there to say...

  • 19 years ago

    by So-Not-Normal

    its definitly not complete crap!! not as good as some of your other ones.. but still reallly good! i guess im just used to u rhyming more lol neways keep up the great writings.. i love them all...
    *-*Kat*-*

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    This isn't as good as some of your overs but thats only because they're so amazing! This is still really good, and not complete crap, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    it's not complete crap, its marvelous...ur writings always are. i love you babe, this is awesome <3 i love you..xxxxx <333

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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