When My Soul Left Me

by ReenIe   Mar 4, 2005


I am surrounded in darkness, and the night air is cold. As I lay, sudden thoughts overpower me.

Then, everything freezes over, and I feel a strong force taking all of my breath away. And as it got harder to breathe, I looked up and saw my soul being torn away from my body.

As I watched in shock, realizing all of this was happening because I've lost all. I've lost hope, dreams, and now my soul.

As I silently scream, reaching out for my soul, pleading for it. Begging for it to come back inside and take over.

And then, with one last struggle, my soul breaks free, able to roam forever.

And as I look to see my soul, I see the most beautiful thing, in all its imperfection.

Its ice blue eyes were so sad and scared, my innocence beaming through a cold stare.

Its faded skin, pale as the moon looked deathly cold.

My pale blue hair enclosed my face until you could see nothing but my blue lips. Hiding me from the world.

My body was frail and tortured, and only rags covered me.

As I looked into my soul, and as my soul looked into me, a tear of ice began to run down my soul's face; and it began to move away from me as I faded into the dark, never to be remembered again.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Good poem. You really improving.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    definately a big improvement. i really like this poem and it seemed to reach out to what i am all about. Good job on improving your skills.

    Five/Five

    P.S. thanks for your comment on my poem.

  • amazing poem - keep it up
    Jemma

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! so dark and creative! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor