I take you in,
I take you out,
I tease you so
Your lust’s devout

Your best stanza yet.

Another brilliant job.

B

D@mn this one is great! One of my favorites of yours. Great job!

Woah.
Thats all I can say
Good job!

thats HOT! awesome job...wow...i dont even know how to explain it other than: great job! keep writing for us!!=D
x3 Kk

that was really good your great and kind of inspire me, keep it up!
~love sabrina~

that was really good your great and kind of inspire me, keep it up!
~love sabrina~

aww how cute i loved the poem.. i gave it a 5.. you did a great job writing this poem.. plz vote and comment on some of mine... thanks..

wow, really great piece. great imagery great ... EVERYTHING. nice job. 5

Great Poem !!!!i loved it. i once had something like that happen to me ...mabee i should write about it,

Jennah

mami_122304@hotmail.com

Wow..your poems are all so exciting! Amazing job..The title was very nice and the whole poem was just hott and amazing! Keep it up!:o)
Shannon

Wow...man that was amazing. Not sure much else I can say. Just wow. Oh and I loved the title.

hmmm that poem was really great. extremly hott, you have such a way with words even virgins can feel it. ;) lol comment on sum of my stuff please!!
5!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Did u rite that ure self?
it iz lyk the best poem i have eva read !!!!!!
its sooo kewl
did it really happen ??

It didnt really happen, but I did write it myself. I write all my poetry and posts myself. It wouldnt be fun to listen to compliments and criticisms all day if it werent :)

Thanks guys

Wow, very <swallows> detailed. :)
-A

What words arent in the dictionary? Slang?

Now that's wat I call poetry! i miss my my man...

Great very detailed. Keep writing poetry.

thats good dang were did you get something like that?

hott one! keep it up! nicely written! take care. :)