That was a great poem. Hot and sexy! It was really long, but you wrote it well and it was interesting.
~BJ~

Wonderfully done and hot, hot, hot!

I LOVE THAT POEM! IT WAS GREAT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

X33,
Kirsten

That is a awsome poem email me dragons619@hotmail.com

Erotic excellence, superbly done Kaitlin, bravo, wow!!!

This is crazy, but it is really good I wonted to know what made you come upwith this? I mean D@#* I aint really into poems like that but this is a work of art. If you have any more poems like this or any others at all send them t me............ Shena W.

Wow.. That is all I have to say. That was a GREAT poem. I LOVED it..absolutly loved it. One of the best erotic poems I have ever read. You are truly a poet. Great job. Keep it up ;) 5/5

Excellent poem, you are truly a poet, love your style, good use of vocabulary, good job. 5/5

That was the hotest poem ever... i showed it to my boyfriend and lets just say "you know what im getting at" great poem... brianna<3

I love it my favorite

Woah! that was so long but too great, just amazing, I have nothing to add, good job

Damn i wanted more..at first i was like this too long now its too short

Thats is an amazing peice of art! Wonderfully penned. 5/5

I really like this becuase (to tell the truth) my girlfriend (the one im planning to marry) and i had sex. it was her first time. it was wonderful just for the fact that we're so in love.

Wow.. very nice.. Had an experience just about like this, only it was on an old airport strip just out of town in late spring..

keep up the great writing. 5/5
ctm

WoW.......................................................Yeah

Great poem. It was full of details and it had a good flow. It was kinda long but in this case that was a good thing. 5/5

Can u make more like these i thike to have fun while reading these kind of poems...

This was soo...
cute.
I mean that in the best way you can take it.

This was soo...
cute.
I mean that in the best way you can take it.