How Would It Feel??? Oops...

by CaptainTyingKnots   Mar 4, 2005


How would it feel
the knife
sliding across your throat

oops
there goes the knife
here comes your blood
like a torrential down pour
or oncoming flood

your choking on your blood
you've fallen in the mudd
gasping for air
no one around to care

your eyes get wide
you've almost died
you stare at me
pleaing for help
i glare at you
remembering the pain
you put me through
this is what
i had to do

i guess thats how it feels
cause all of this is real...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

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  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    awesome, very well written 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It's very good. Keep it up