Rainbow.

by xxangelchicxx2000   Mar 4, 2005


Life is a rainbow to me
In it are all the pretty color I see
Orange, blue, yellow and green
Are all so pretty.
So enjoy while you can
Because you might not get another chance.

i wrote ths poem for my english class we were suppose to write a 6 line poem about life. so comment on it if you want. i know its not that good.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good Nida =) 5/5! keep it up..
    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    No its a good poem I'm sure if added to it it would be even better!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    great poem i rly liked it xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Actually I thought it was pretty good. I rather enjoyed it.

    I would leave it alone and if you wanted to rewrite it then post the new one as well and title it the same but add the 2nd after it.... anyways, that is just my opinion....

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by Fireflower

    i agree with the others.. it seemed like it wasnt finished... you need more details... but other than that, it wasnt all that bad of a poem!

    vedali

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