great write hun...i love you, dunno what else to say xxxx <3

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

thank you for coming back and explaining. The trick of poetry is not to confuse your readers but make them think :) and i succeeded I believe lol.

As for your poem, not the best but it's still good, i loved the ideal of "breathe your spirit" sounds so creative and beautiful...great job 4/5

i'm going to add you to my faves, I like your style and honesty!

with Love,
Heather.

wow that was such a good poem, even if it was written in a rush, it was really beautiful, i loved it. hope everythings okay, xxxx