My First I Love You

by Ashley McGlone   Jul 31, 2003


I smile where laughter can't be seen
And tears of joy run in between
My heart shows a weakness I've never known
A new type of love you have shown
Your words touch my heart in many ways
That three word phrase sets my soul ablaze
Your voice echoes in the depths of my ears
Hearing I love you sends away my fears
~I love you too~

Please comment...I actually wrote this one in about 15 minutes...but it came straight from the heart where I was thinking of someone...I miss you!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Sweet

  • 18 years ago

    by angela s

    This poem is really good I love how you put the words together. Could you read some of my poems and be very unist about them.

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    beautifully done! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by otto

    I like the your use of the words you choose...it's good...Cause one to make a picture of the words written

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