My Home***

by NoPatience   Mar 6, 2005


I'm sitting outside
this lonely, shattered house
I don't say a word
I am quiet as a mouse

Its Breezy out here
So quiet and so sad
The trees have fallen
and this is what i had

To see this house go
is what kills me inside
I remember when I lived here
I remember when that died

I see the beat down doors
I see nothing but whats true
I see a lonely girl inside
that lonely girl is you

Here i go again
I'm talking to myself
I can't understand my pain
or why I need your help

Whenever I get close to something
It's always torn away
this gives me the heartache and the pain
I just wish I could stay

This house has been my home
for a huge part of my past
I wish I could stay forever
I wish this time could last

I've been through so mush
In this broken down place
we were going to fix it up
But now it's a disgrace

When my Father passed away
It seemed to all just shatter
this house is what he worked on
And that is why it matters...

I know this is not my best work but i would appreciate it if you all would vote, comment! i would really appreciate it!
Take Care
Paulette

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  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    well thank you!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    theres only one word to describe this poem: amazing. well done ! x

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good starting out poem not too much of the self piuty thing just more tearful at least thats the way i see it good job...

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    thx coral!

  • 19 years ago

    by coral

    nice paulette
    <3 me