Died for love

by Jess   Mar 6, 2005


I’m staring at your picture
With no one else around
I hold it firmly in my hand
As a tear falls to the ground

What happened to those nights
Where we both felt so close?
Nothing could have come between us
This is what I miss the most

My hand around your waist
Your lips upon my lips
The moon beaming down on us
And your hands upon my hips

It felt like it was right
When I looked into your eyes
How could I have known
That your words were filled with lies

I can’t believe you told me
Right then, and right there
That you didn’t want me anymore
As your fingers combed through my hair

I couldn’t believe it then
I still don’t believe it now
How you could say you love me
Then let me go somehow

The tears run down my cheeks
As I ask forgiveness from the lord above
Please inscribe on my grave
That I am one who died for love

My stomach starts to burn
As I pour more liquor in my cup
The gun is to my head
And now my time is up

**i dont think its one of my better ones..
but tell me what you think.. thanks..**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lilly

    this poem is amazing

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebecca

    This was a good poem it reminds me of how I feel about my ex. Keep writeing more poems and I beleive that you will get over him just like I said theres more fish in thee sea. If you get the chance can you vote on my poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Left-Forever-No-More-Trying

    heya
    that was a well cool poem, if my boyfriend ever left me i would kill myself and i have already planned how i'm going to do it and everything, but hey you're poem ws great and carry on the good work.
    luv you
    love hannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem you've written =)
    Thanx for the comment on my poem..
    keep it up.. 5 stars for you *****
    Take Care

  • 19 years ago

    by ladypyro666

    I loved it...again, good job!