hmmmm. dont know what to say about this one. i enjoyed it. i enjoyed reading it. but not sure what to say! well done though.

Mike

wow great job.. it was short but it need not to be longer.. it gave the perfect message. I loved the very light tone of the poem it all flowed very smoothly. Your also a very talented poet so keep writing and never give up.. and I hope things get easier for you. 5/5! great job.

xoxox Britney xoxox

~Good poem~

Great write, this one had the rhythm that I like in some of your other poems. Also a good message, 5/5.

Like will my friends and I,
should be
'Like; "will my friends and I,
become teachers or dancers?"
I like this, it's cute. your writing ability is powerful, keep it up!5/5

Ive run out of good things to say about your great poems
dhaval

Great poem!! Love it!!!! Keep it up!