Comments : Getting used to...

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, very good I can really relate, well done good write keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow, this is a great poem hun! So great! I can relate to this a lot. Keep it up.

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    luv it. keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    So sad but very well written! Loved it!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    wow i loved that and i can really relate to it! awesome i gave it a five keep it up you have talent

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    This is really sad..5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    light yet really deep... you gave it this bubbely feeling...Cant explain it...

    Xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I hope this poem has helped get rid of some emotions that have built up inside. This subject may be cliche but you did a good job. Thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by hussain

    Getting used to feeling
    feelings I've never had

    the poem flowed well apart from this point...the rest is really good. but as i read it this part it hindered the flow abit maybe the repeatition of feeling. Overall it was a great good poem and i like the style and enjoyed reading it. take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah-Louise

    Sorry to keep commenting on your rhyming scheme, but:
    'Getting used to screaming
    Into my pillow fighting pain
    Getting used to seeing
    something I can't have'
    The 'pain' and the 'have' are totally out of sync with the rest of them poem. I like the way it's quite snappy and repettitive though. x

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    yet another poem that i can relate to! love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    well written honest dark poem

  • 18 years ago

    by michelle

    this is really from the heart i can tell. it touched me, keeps writing!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Perfect...that's all there is to describle this one. It pretty much remindes me...of me. I loved it. Good work!
    *Jordan-Paige