WOW hun! This was so sad!:*( You have got some talent! Keep up the good work! ~5/5~
Love alwayz....
Haily
XOXOXOXO

Omg such a great poem! So sad though, My grandma died when i was 7. In fact i wrote a poem on here for her. :)

Is it good when a poem makes you cry.
Very touching. 5/5

In the next to last verse you need to take out a (the)

sweet
liked it xxxx

That one was amazing

aw, that was great! i think next time you should spell out the number six instead of the number six like this 6

Excellent write, very well done. Expressed yourself very well, that too with good flow in rhyme!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

p/s

thanks for your comments and votes on my poems

thats a very sweet poem! a true friendship never dies no matter the distance as long as you have them in you heart! *heather

wow.. that was an amazing poem i started crying. awesome job.

Thats sad. Im sry to hear that! but as usual I liked it.

I cried. thats really touching.