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First of all, THANKS !!! for your comments on my poem. I really apreciate it. And I love this poem, it's great and I can relate to it.

It obvious you’re hiding something
A secret you won’t say
You try hard to conceal it
But I notice from day to day

This thing you’re trying to mask
I’ve detected for quite a while
And when I think you’re about to tell me
All I receive is your eternal smile.

I love specially this parts of it. 5/5 keep it up, you're an excellent writer. Take care of your self.

aww i liked this one alot... it was really good, seriously you are and excellent poet your going to go really far if you keep up the awesome work!!!

thanks for the read... keep writing so i can read more off your poems and leave lots and lots of comments lol....:-) thanks again!!

this poem is awesome!great work!keep writing..thanks for commenting on mine!x0x0
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Again this is a great poem 5/5. This is really good stuff, well done! xx {again!}

ur poem is really good and has got me 4 sure thinking bout my own relationship so thnx and keep writing it's good