These Chains

by ReenIe   Mar 8, 2005


I watch from below, despising all the people who take their freedom for granted, not knowing it could be taken away at any moment.

I despise the little children as they freely run, not knowing what is to become of them. Then I think of a time I used to be as free them. I remember how I used to roam freely without a care, until I met you.

At first, you were the all around person, kind, sweet, and charming. But then we had our first disagreement, and you were never the same.

I wouldn't back down, so you decided to make me, by force. You twisted my arm back so hard I screamed until the wine glass lying on the table burst. Then you pushed me to the ground and made me swear to never tell anyone or else you would take the only two things I own away from me.

From then on, you were always quick to hit, making sure I knew my place.

When I think about it, the worst part wasn't what you did to me. It was when I had to hide myself from the world, telling half-truths and whole lies, becoming non-existent and fading into nothingness from the world.

Then one day I thought I was strong enough to fight you. To take what’s mine back from you. But I was wrong.

You found out what I tried to do, so you raped me and took away my innocence. Then my soul.

When you held my hands above my head and did as you pleased, laughing as you pierced through my body. It hurt so bad and I could feel the blood run down my leg as you thrust even deeper into my body. I was cursing you to stop.

When you finished, I looked into your eyes and saw nothing. It was like your spirit had died and your soul had left you. You were no longer human, you were another being.

As you leaned over and proceeded to take all of me, you yelled out something foreign to me and suddenly everything went dark inside and out of me. I felt something spiritual leave me, never to return again.

Then I realized forever I will be a slave to you. You have eternally locked me up with these invisible chains, never to be broken.

So all I do now is watch from below, despising all the people who take their freedom for granted, not knowing it could be taken away at any moment.

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  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    That was awesome! You're right, I did enjoy it! As I was reading it I was hoping it really didn't happen to you! Great job and thanks for the comment! (",)

    ~Krissy

  • 19 years ago

    by redxiii

    that was really good i wish i could come up with stuff like that you are alot better than me at poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    U sure have a style of ur own unique and that is what makes ur poems so good. Take Care!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Tiff, girl, imaginations like that are necessary to life, I love things like this....unique!

    ps. as to your comment on "Macabre Love Story", yes , sweetheart, they are people out there like that, necros and all...http://www.crimelibrary.com/serial_killers/notorious/necrophiles/index_1.html
    there you go...read all about it for yourself but I warn you, Its very disturbing to many although it doesn't bother me much anymore because I read it about too often...EnJoY

    with love,
    Heather