wow that was really good! i liked it..im gonna add u to my fav's...check out my poems..tell me what you think..i really like yours bye!

zac plz sign on if u see this...great poem btw

luv ya
*jen-jen*

*5/5*
good poem, keep up the good work

Wow really great poem 5* I luved it keep up the great writting.
Much Luv, Amanda
Plz check out some of my poems and tell me what you think it would mean alot thanks.

Good Job 5.0

Hi! It's your Pirate...I love your poem! It's so sad though, it made me cry...oh well! It was still great! And I loved it!
Love,
Katie

hehe, hi, pirate! ty to everyone! i appreciate it!
*Zac*

Lmao, where the hell did a pirate come from??? lol, i'm confused!!!

oh, it's an inside joke, thing. that's her nickname. she's my sexy little pirate! yessiree!
*Zac*

Haha, that used to be my nickname with some guy I met on AIM, lol, his name was Daniel and I never really knew him, but I joked around with him and stuff. Do you think I'm too much of a flirt? lol.

Love you,

xoxo
Sierra

no! I am THE biggest flirt. lol... wait... that's not something to brag about... forget i said that. but, no, i dont think you're too much of a flirt. not at all!
*Zac*

lol, thanks. I think that's why we are attracted to each other. We're like magnets, ay, ZAC? lol.

I'm clever alright. lol. Names are always so hard for me.

kin means family. yes, i meant to put kin, cuz it was my family that was making me completely nuts!!!
*Zac*

Zac!! Come back to me, lol!!! You posted that today, and here i am!! lol!! R u still awake? Dream sweet dreams!!!

sorry if your family is driving you nuts!! Mine does too.

i'm here!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Zac*

YAY! lol!

Well...i see that I've commented on this before, BUT...i never REALLY got to comment on the poetry itself.
Now, believe me when I say that i am actually reading each and everyone of them.

--The rhyme scheme is enchantingly dark with the simple rhyme scheme. So amazing how -you- can turn something so...ordinary into such a masterpiece.
Bravo!