by Karen Y Mar 9, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
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I can't hold it anymore |
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Really great poem, its quite nice! The flow wasnt as perfect as I thought it would be, but then again it seemed to have elements of both non-rhyming (at certain parts) and rhyming, so I thought it was good :) |
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omg i love it! |
by Beth
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wow great poem. |
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great poem!! very loving.... |