Have you ever?

by Rebecca   Mar 9, 2005


Have you ever?

Have you ever felt like you just can not go on?
And some times I just can not bare it,
Cuz for so many years I have carried it.
Have you ever felt like sometimes Nothing is ever good enough?
It seems like no matter how hard you try,
You always fail.
At times nothing seems to matter,
Ever felt like breaking down?
Ever wanted to cry?
And say forget everything, and let me die?
Ever felt like giving up on life?
Sometimes I feel it is not worth the fight.
It is just not worth all the pain and strife.
Ever felt like it is not worth staying up and crying ever night?
Ever Screamed at the top of your lungs?
But still felt like no one heard you?
Ever just wanted someone to be there for you?

* Me and my friend Brittany wrote this, We would love to know what everyone thinks.. Please vote comment. Thanx everyone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Very true very true. i liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by Jordan

    It was very good. Thanks for commenting on my poem. My sn for aol is bogusbunny13 :-d IM me anytime - Jordan Paige

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very strong words, very repadative rythem, i like it a lot. It is a unique trait that is harness by few but mastered by even less. i think it is a wonderful poem and it is definately a style that i enjoy reading. Look forward to more.

    Five/Five

    P.S. thanks for your comment/vote/ hopeful words, i really do appreciate it a lot.

  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    Aww that was a good poem, different, thats why I liked it. It reminds me of like two people talking, one asking the questions, one answering..its cool that the two of you wrote it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job, Rebecca and Brittany. I guess we all feel like this sometimes. hugs, lol, *Ann*

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