Comments : Tears in the Desert

  • 19 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    Hey bro, great poem, it's really confusing but makes sense at the same time. (I'm not trying to imitate the poem BTW;)) It probably makes so much sense because I feel the exact same way a lot of the time. Anywho, keep it real! peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent job. I really enjoyed reading it. Take care and God bless! :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Anne Conner

    I feel the same way sometimes. Great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by [Neon/] ©

    i'm so tired of seeing crappy comments on your poems! so i will say this..
    this poem is utterly gorgeous.
    you need to write more!
    i demand more!
    until then i'm going on strike.
    there...thats something "odd" for you to read.

    email me lovely.
    SarA

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    this is a kewl write.. on of da best poems ive read this week
    kudos:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    wow. that was a phenomanal poem. it had a lot of power. great write. LYMTAB!!! ciao~lyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Clown

    good poem...5

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Love the metaphors and confusingness (if that's a word) or it. Reminds me of my two latest..the Metaphorical Murder ones (in case you happened to stumble upon them ;)). It was absolutely amazing and also mysterious.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael

    Lipton, wow, that was amazing!! I don't think I could've described myself better!! my favorite part was "Offering of love, rendering me uneasy.
    Always helping, the one that's not me.

    Screaming inside, unsure of what's real.
    Pretending to know, when I can’t even feel.
    Crying endlessly, obstructing my view.
    Unsure what to say, knowing what’s true."
    You're really talented, I'm sure you hear that a lot, but it's true. A beautiful description of life and love, excellent write!

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Wow, very powerful. Enjoyed very much reading this.
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by Freakie_D

    Wow...I loved it. So contridictionary. Its like one of my poems "I am part three" sad yet so very well written, and filled with emotion 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather L.

    I really love reading your stuff I think I've read almost all of them now. Your an amazing writer I wish i was that good. I enjoy the emotion you put in them, it makes me feel like i'm more into them. Sorry about the rambling

  • great poem! its powerful and beautifully writen.
    blessings
    courtie

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    brilliant work. I enjoyed reading it.
    you have a lot of talent.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by More

    I really love this piece. i guess it's cause i can relate to it! it's very nice! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    These poems are great, they are exactly what I look for when I read poetry- i mean exactly, your poems seem like things I would write haha
    Like those time poems you have, I have a similar one with a similar message ill be posting soon

    These are great- keep em comin