very mysterious dark poem

Awww.....WOW! I'm so speechless about this poem. It was scary and then at the end when you said the killer was your dad, that's when I literaly almost started crying. Very good job! I enjoy reading your poems. Please keep writing. =)

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Sarah

wow - thats incredible but so so sad. thanks fro your comments - it means alot.
Jem

That is so very sad I felt tears coming amazing poem, and thanks for all the comments!

take care

Wow that is horrible just to think of. Great job and that is some amazing imagination you have. Thanks for the comment.

I knew it was the dad the whole time, i like this, very well written, a 5/5

Loved the narrative in this poem

lol good poem

good poem i love it

WOW ... I rele rele enjoyed this poem ... very very good !!! =]

and wait ... is this tru ??!!!

oh wait nvm ... ur n0t dead

Omg this poem is so wounderful. Very sad though...It really touched me. EXCELLENT job! >3jess

That's shocking. Really. Strong and well-written. Sad and gloomy. What a story. Keep up the good work. Its a 5/5

Kurt

nice job keep it up!

This is AWESOME!!!!! i love it. i was in suspense the WHOLE time I loved it

this is an awesome poem i LOVE it. keep writing this poem Rox

yo that poem was soooo awesome
Great job

I loved it! It showed alot of emotion.. Keep writing always.. 5/5

*> : PainOfOne

WOW!! This was a really sad poem! I hope you are doing well and that your father has been caught! Stay strong and if you need to talk email me at
skittles_7890@yahoo.com
Love Alwayz....
Haily
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