Great poem Katie! 5 stars for you =)
Keep up the good work.. please check out some of my poems! take care

LIKE MOST OF YOUR POEMS.. LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF MINE.. this was a long poem!! take a long time?5

wow !!! wow!! just wow!!! i'm speechless, it's a great poem.

woah!! bit on the long side but still i lOVE dark p oetry...ur poems remind me of mine .are we long lost sisters?? lol just kidding
5/5 keep writing

A very loooong, but very well written poem...once again you have written an awsome poem.... Keep it coming Katie, you are very talented!!!

What can I say, VERY impressive. Keep up the good work Katie!

Good job. I especially loved:

"I feel the beat of my blackened heart
I sit and rip myself apart
Losing in my final fight
Taken into darkened nights"

There were also many other parts that I loved but figure I wouldn't crowd up your comments page. I liked the rhyming pattern and flow this had.

~ one word >>>>> 'wow'
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

awesome poem a bit lengthy for my attention span...but good i liked it...

WOW! katie each poem get better and better. :D

i agree with everyone else you are talent at your age

wow, this poem really touched me and at this momment in time i knida feel the same way :( but i loved ur poems keep it up thnx

Matt