I love the originality and imagination great poem def 5

take care

ahh the suspense it created....wow...great job Katie!

with love,
Heather

A good write

wow! amazing, i love it! its so thrilling...

~ excellent katie! ~ roses are red, violets are blue. this poem was, a great one from you lol
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

~ excellent katie! ~ roses are red, violets are blue. this poem was, a great one from you lol
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

wow thats great! its building up suspence all the way through well done keep workin hard!!

Great poem. I wrote one similar to it; using the "Roses are red" thing. You should check it out... It's called Roses.. Lol, duh! Haha.. Anyway, great job hun! And thanks for the comments, they mean a lot!

Love always,
Tiff

Oops, nope, it's called Red... God, can't even remember the names of my own poems! :S Lol..

Not bad... not bad at all. I SO feel this way about a boy in school who made a rumor about me loving him and wanting him. I will read this to him one day:)