Hey what's up? You commented on mine and thanx. This is a really good poem I really liked it. Keep up the good work.

This poem made me cry, I got tears in my eyes now!!! I reminds me of the day I tried to commit suicide....Great poem, I really loved it!

This poem is so sad. Great visuals. >3jess

Thanx u guys for commenting. I feel more confident now in myself. I appreaciate it all. I am gonna cry b'cuz actually people believe in me now. I always wanted that. thanks for all of your support. Can't wait to hear back from you all! much love
~(B044!3)~ Bonnie

your poem has really great visuals I really like it... it made me cry...

awww, this is so sad. i loved it. thank you for sharing it
take care
- shell

this is so sad, but so beutiful. really made me think about things. please keep writing and i wil ladd you to mi favorites if thats ok cos i want to read some more! please keep it up and take care!
Polly ~X~

Sad! crying! so much of a great poem :)

Heart Reaching. I gave you a 4!

dis poem is hott keep up the good work

Sad and really good

this is so sad! and so good! keep it up!
take care
love tegan

wow datz really deep and i loved it keep writing oxoxoxoxoxox
p.s plz comment on mine

What An Amazing Poem.
Great read.
5/5

Failed.

Excellent!!! I love it.

plz vote/comment on my poem "The death of my mother"
I will really appericate it. Thanks

Noziyna

Ok for Dance in the ashes or something like that, The person had already made the cut whenever the other person walked in. Since he cut really really deep he knew he was going to die. The other person wanted to comfort him while they had the chance. It may seem dumb to you, but then that only means that u dont understand the situation. I aint mad! haha i still luv ya all. w.b

my god all i can say is woooow, reading that, i really felt everything, i wana cry! totaly amazing stuff.

L*may

loved it! it was so sad. it almost brought me to tears. beautifuly out and well told with excellent imagry. i really enjoyed reading it, so heartfelt. kepp up the excellent work!

~*LorienElf*~

that was really sad:( another poem that made me cry...wow it was so emotional:'( Great job

wow I got chills when I read that....awesome job!