Wow!!! Pretty impressive work hun! That was great! How do you do it? all you're poems are so good! I especially love the dark ones! Keep at the good work! Here for you xxx

p.s just read your comment about my poems - made me smile so much!! Your comments always seem to make me smile loads! And thats hard for people to do! Despite what you say, not one of the poems ive read of yours has been sucky or bad!! I'm pretty similar to you actually, I just start writing and write whatever I feel! I can't wait to see your next poem :-D xxxxx

Simply brilliant. At first i thought this was going to be some erotic poem (lol). So I liked how you used the image of th eboa constrictor another way. Very nice.

Lmao, no lol, I don't write love stories very often, nonetheless erotic poems lol. I would suck at that, lol. lmao, how is a boa constrictor erotic? lol, i find them horrifying and painful. Thanks though.

i love it, great write!

thanks again Andrea! xxx

Lol you know how guys sometimes refer to their members as anacondas or boa constrictors... or maybe thats just the guys at my school :S Anyway, it's still a really nice poem. :)
-A

LMAO!!! lol, i guess I can see what you mean!! Its just, lol, it even says on the side-dark poems. Thanks for reading it still ;-D.

Aw, thanks Hailie, I'm proud of this one, but once again, not one of my best. SWEET!! THERE'S THE TORNADO SIREN! YEEHAW!! lol!! (Tornados are pretty cool :-D.)