I love you

by marla   Mar 14, 2005


What on my body is
red white and blue?
The color of my wrists,
sad, but true.
The red is the blood,
bleeding for you.
The white is my skin,
which was caressed by you.
The blue is my veins,
which throbbed for you.
And there's clear
also there,
which make up the tears.

But through all the torture,
the love and the horror,
too late I realize only the truth:
Darling, I love you.

***I made this up as it went along in Study Hall. Vote and comment!***

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  • 19 years ago

    by anastsia

    ummmmmmm i just realized that u put this up on my b-day well peter's locker# is 3104 so u don't 4 get and the poem is good well i already knew that

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I thought it was a great poem and there's no suggestions i can make:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow that was really good! U have talent! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Jess

    wow this poem was soo good! i can relate to it alot too! great job!! keep it up!

    check out my poems if your interested :o) let me kno if you like 'em!

    ..xO Jessie

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, amazing poem, well done :D 5/5

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