Comments : Metaphorical Murder: The Killer

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow....i love this. very dark writing, great work!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ very very nice write, excellent poem
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    this part's way better than one, both good, but i like this one bunches more...loved the word usage:)
    5/5
    with love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Wow, i really liked both of the parts, and in my opinion they are both equally good. Good job, this one had very good word usage. Thanks for commenting on my poem, and also thanks for telling me when this part came, i enjoyed reading it! 5/5 for sure!
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by Tara

    Very well written....the line about porcelain complexion turning blue is my favorite part of the poem (you've got a great way with words!) 5/5!
    -Tara