Alone

by Hans   Mar 15, 2005


I feel like i've just woken up
from this dream that people call life
somewhere i have lost my way
for the last three years of my life i've thrown away

for three year i have lived a dream
nothing to show for it , nothing i've lived
i feel like i wasted my life
when did i loose the track of time?

feel way too old now for what i have
not even real friends that i can call up
i was supposed to be more than that
i had many goals for this so called life

i feel now my life has fallen apart
i wish i could get that spark to come back
i lost my smile, my faith and my time
in this daydream that i call my life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    This is great poem... i like the meaning very inspiring.. i really enjoyed reading this poem really great! keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    A very well written poem and it had a good message! Keep it up! Take care of yourself! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    It was a great poem. You really did express what you really feel. It was well written and it flows very well. Stay strong and never loss hope. Still great work!!5/5 =)

    Can u plz comment on my new poem titled My Story Part II thanks!!!=)

  • 19 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Good poem! A great message and great word choice. Its sad at the same time : ( I'm sorry if you really feel this way : ( But keep the writing up!

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