~ omg! beautiful poem, gr8 one!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit
~ read & rate some of my poem when you get time...

Great poem.

Good job. Really liked it. (btw my 2nd part to the Metaphorical Murder poem is already posted). Keep up the good work.

Very good an emotional poem from the heart! Check out some of mine if u would Thanx!

Wow!!! This is so great, emotions from the heart and a great way to describe them, love it! Keep it up xxx

amazing poem!

Your poem is really heart felt, i can feel exactly what you're talking about...i've been there too, it's so hard to heal someone who has been hurt. Check out my poems sometime, thanks!

I feel ya

Aww, that'S a sweetTpoeM! I likE iT :)

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I liked this very much. i can relate to this. i know how it hurts. ur poem is very well written