Excellent poem...so spiritual and beautiful....take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Excellent writing and explanation
Michael

great poem..

Very good write it has such meaning!

take care

wonderful poem. keep it up

Thanks for all the comments. Your work is great. :)

hmm i liked the over all theme and flow of the poem but i can't help pointing out soe of the rhyming sounded forced..but maybe tht's just me..
good work:)