Omg, that is soo good!! I love this line:

What’s the point in living
If I don’t feel alive

That was very powerful. Awesome job! :)

Love,
Tiff

wow a powerful poem, I really relate....Thats just how I feel about my mom, she never cared for me!!!

Yeah i agree, very powerful poem, and i enjoyed reading it. I especially liked the last few lines, the ones about God taking you under his wing. Keep on writing, loved this one.
SatuzKa

omg that is soooo sad:( but really well written 5/5! I know how you feel...i hope you don't don't do it though keep your chin up!
xxxChristinaxxx

I dont agree that it is a "powerful poem,..
It is a Very POwerful poem.
For me it takes a lot of energy
when i'm writing poems like this..
keep it up!
Okies...cookies..
;)

Very well written with such true emotion also so sad. I remember growing up and feeling I could never do anything right in my moms eyes. But now that I am older we now get along. I hope things will work out for u! Hang in there Take Care!

great one. I've put you in my favorites.