Comments : Little Sister

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow, wow, wow... That was sooooo good. Wowwwwww... Lol. Very good.. I really don't know what to say.

    Love you much,
    Tiff

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    The poem so real.
    I can feel it.
    As if i'm a friend of your soul.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I think you did a great job with that poem, i really liked the idea of writing a poem about your little sister. Beautiful. I bet your little sister loved the poem! I can't give you anything less than 5/5, keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    great poem Sherrie =) 5 stars for this one. keep it up! Take Care

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent job u can feel ur true feelings as u read this poem! I loved it I am sure ur sister does too! Would u please check out my new on My Blessing Thanx!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    wow, that was a beautiful poem, I love the emotions that come through in it.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by hussain

    wow very beutiful poem..

  • 18 years ago

    by D..

    Your words are so touching and i really felt every one, i really relate , my poems are about my sister too, take a look and youll see why i felt your poem so much.
    Doreen

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    5/5
    excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    that was really good. it was kinda a bit sad, but then again it was kinda happy. it was great. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    "Spinning, arms opened wide
    As if to embrace the sunset
    A child of sunshine, of innocence"
    I love love love LOVE this part! So full of beautiful imagery!
    Besides that, this poem, all in all, is just amazing. So....expressive, so sincere....I absolutely love it!

    Christa//No Motiv?

    Also, thanks for the wonderful comments =)

  • 18 years ago

    by *liZ*

    this is very good I like the whole thought, flow, and sturcture. and yes, you can tell it's from your heart.
    great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    This is great
    i can tell it came straight out of your soul

  • This Was Absolutely Beautiful 5/5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    good job! i really like this, and i feel exactly the same way about my lil sister (not biologically related, but i still love her all the same)