That poem is great. I think that is one of the best poems I've read so far. You are a dam good writer. I gave you a 5. I would like it if you could comment on some on my stuff becuase it looks like you know what you are talking about.

I love the style.
The meaning behind the words.
This poem needs a second look.
keep on writing!
;)

Beautiful! Loved your choice of words and such a great flow! 5!

omg.. i love this poem! you have an awesome imagination! i love how all the lines have the same beat... its great! i look forward to reading more of your poems. maybe you could look at mine!? lol please! thanks!

thats very sad....i no how u feel i'v been there b/4 trust me....just dont give nd keep smiling...5/5 great poem