Comments : My Broken Vow

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, A beautiful poem, Love can be wonderful and sometimes it can hurt you like * * * *! hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    i totally love this poem it flowed so goood and it was worded great!!!
    5/5 you deserve it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    u know thats whats up! wen I broke up wif my boy a while back I felt da same way.wow good grl.Luv lotz and thanx for the comments they really lift me wen im down~.~BRitBRat

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Loved this poem! Beautifully written and I can really relate. :D
    all in all it's a 5 in my book. ;)
    -Peace

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Heartfelt as always~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    You have the chance Heather. I think you for writing such a wondeful love poem about me. I know that there is a lot of things that i want to say but i can't say.

    I am always here to get to know better, you can always count on me Heather...Truely you are who i want to be...so far i like what i see.

    oh, Five/Five

    Five/Five

    P.S. I am Shaun and heather is a great person who i am blessed to get along with very well.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wonderful writing...simply amazing talent. =)

    *hugs*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    hey girl! sorry i have been so busy lately and i havn't been commenting as much as i wish i could, lots of school projects and drivers ed, i'm trying to keep up but hopefully you can understand! but ok for the poem it's great it shows how someone could have a crush, and love someone but the questions seem to fill thier mind, someone who has been hurt and is taking another chance. it's great keep it up! PLP

    ~lil slam~ lots of hugs!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    girl you have a very good way with words!
    keep writing!
    this one is deserves a five!