Good poem liked the feel it protrayed, keep writing!

take care

Very different thing to write about unique and very well done!

You definitely have potential for an 11 year old!!! I can proudly say that. Very unique quality and I do have to admit there aren't a lot of 11 year olds on here. So, this was definitely original and unique.

Are you a Spy or something?
This is a good one.
I like the adventure in it.
keep on writing..
Okies..Cookies..
;)

Very good! I voted a 5!! Please check out my poems "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" and "My Dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/vote it would mean so much to me =) thanks a lor, hugs

very unique a commic book poem good job

weird but good at the same time ``-``